Monday, November 17, 2008

In happy times and in bends
a flip and flop with new found friends
a laughter a hope and a slapstick joke..
a low a high and your deep down broke
a pick a drop, a slurp and a chop,
a wink a smirk till eyes drop
a clap a hail, for trick a mail.
a walk a sip and a new found trail
a tip a lead a nip in the bud
a smoke a scratch in the forest mud
a jeep a grip a wind a bird
a click a bond a peacocks pond
a spark a lull a secular bunch
a peg a treble with a soda punch .
a yin a yang a flick to stall
a dawn a bell a wake up call
a trim a daze in the morning haze
a song a tear and a look of craze
a peddle a push a right a scare
a hill a bridge a tan to dare
a fist a splash a vibe to match.
a bump a toast a thrill to most
a dig a cross from south to nord
a time a trip at river tern lodge...

7 comments:

Le Conquerant said...

hey dream runner, good job with the poem. you have captured the experience well..i like the choice of words. Why dont you try your hand with more poems..probab you could publish this in some mag that you know of ;)

Dream Runner said...

thnx for the kind words and yea sure.. will take ur suggestions seriously!!:(

Djen said...

Poetic. felt pretty good to read it. waiting for more post like this.

Rags said...

Good One :D

Rags
x

Jaykay said...

hello! :P :P

Hatikvah said...

Modern rap meets bucolic sizzle. Rustic and eminently hummable...

angel from heaven said...

Good poem and very descriptive ,catching the atmosphere well.



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