In happy times and in bends
a flip and flop with new found friends
a laughter a hope and a slapstick joke..
a low a high and your deep down broke
a pick a drop, a slurp and a chop,
a wink a smirk till eyes drop
a clap a hail, for trick a mail.
a walk a sip and a new found trail
a tip a lead a nip in the bud
a smoke a scratch in the forest mud
a jeep a grip a wind a bird
a click a bond a peacocks pond
a spark a lull a secular bunch
a peg a treble with a soda punch .
a yin a yang a flick to stall
a dawn a bell a wake up call
a trim a daze in the morning haze
a song a tear and a look of craze
a peddle a push a right a scare
a hill a bridge a tan to dare
a fist a splash a vibe to match.
a bump a toast a thrill to most
a dig a cross from south to nord
a time a trip at river tern lodge...
7 comments:
hey dream runner, good job with the poem. you have captured the experience well..i like the choice of words. Why dont you try your hand with more poems..probab you could publish this in some mag that you know of ;)
thnx for the kind words and yea sure.. will take ur suggestions seriously!!:(
Poetic. felt pretty good to read it. waiting for more post like this.
Good One :D
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Modern rap meets bucolic sizzle. Rustic and eminently hummable...
Good poem and very descriptive ,catching the atmosphere well.
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